Are you watching me die, Fish?
With your big fish eye
through that clear, crisp pond?
Shimmer on fish,
with your Orange snatches of Silver –
blinding my retiring eye!
You watching me?
With that eye?
Shimmer on Fish
let me die.
Thanks for this great comment. My fish has been a great comfort to me, sad really, and I’m fortunate to have been inspired watching it flap about underwater. Enjoy the rest 🙂
Thanks for this great comment. My fish has been a great comfort to me, sad really, and I’m fortunate to have been inspired watching it flap about underwater. Enjoy the rest 🙂
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I loooooove the originality and rhythm of this!
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